How to Write Subplots That Actually Matter
Most subplots fall flat — not because they’re bad ideas, but because they don’t serve the story. In this deep-dive guide, you'll learn how to design subplots that actually matter: the kind that reveal character, reinforce theme, and keep readers hooked. Whether you’re outlining or revising, this is your roadmap to tighter, more meaningful storytelling.
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How to Write Subplots That Actually Matter
Your Story Deserves More Than Just Side Quests
Subplots can make or break a novel.
They’re not decorative. They’re not optional. They’re structural.
Done well, a subplot becomes the emotional echo of your main arc — reinforcing your theme, testing your characters, and drawing the reader deeper into your world. Done poorly, it becomes narrative clutter — the kind readers skim past or forget altogether.
The truth is, a subplot should be just as intentional as your main plot. When woven correctly, it can elevate the entire reading experience. But if it’s treated like an afterthought, it can sabotage your pacing, dilute your message, or distract from the emotional core.
In this guide, we’ll walk you through what subplots really are (and aren’t), how to design them with purpose, and how to ensure they serve your story from beginning to end — not sideline it.
What a Subplot Is — and What It’s Not
A subplot is a secondary narrative thread that runs alongside your main story. It has its own arc, its own stakes, and ideally, its own transformation.
But a subplot should never feel like a detour.
It should:
Test your protagonist in ways the main plot can’t
Explore or complicate your book’s central theme
Contribute directly to character development, emotional tension, and structural pacing
Think of your story like a symphony. The main plot is the melody — the through-line that anchors everything. But the subplot is the harmony. When done right, it enriches the tone, adds dimension, and makes the entire piece more memorable.
What subplots are not:
A break from the story
A dumping ground for backstory or exposition
A side character’s indulgent monologue
A romantic filler that exists just to check a box
If it doesn’t reveal something essential, evolve the characters, or deepen the stakes — it’s filler. And filler gets skipped.
The Three Core Purposes of a Subplot
Before you add any secondary arc, you should know exactly why it exists. Good subplots serve one or more of the following strategic purposes:
1. Character Catalyst
A subplot should apply emotional pressure on your protagonist — ideally in a way the main plot can’t. It should force them to make decisions, confront contradictions, or experience a change in self-perception.
For example:
Your main plot might be about defeating a political enemy, but your subplot could be about a strained relationship with a sibling — which exposes your protagonist’s guilt or pride in a more personal, vulnerable way.
Ask:
What flaw or blind spot does this subplot challenge?
How does it force the protagonist to grow?
What choice must they make — and how does that choice reveal who they are?
2. Thematic Echo
If your book is about justice, your subplot might explore mercy. If your story is about freedom, your subplot might explore obligation. These echoes give your theme resonance and weight.
A well-crafted subplot doesn’t just mimic your theme — it adds nuance. It gives the reader a new lens to examine the same central idea, while avoiding repetition.
Ask:
What is my central theme?
How can this subplot challenge or mirror that theme?
What new questions does it raise?
3. Structural Balance
Subplots help with pacing, tension, and structural rhythm. They can inject humor, suspense, or emotion at key points where the main plot needs a breather — or an extra push.
They also create opportunities to foreshadow, mislead, or reveal important information through indirect means.
Ask:
Where does the main plot slow down?
Could a subplot add energy or texture at this point?
Can I use the subplot to trigger a key turning point?
Types of Subplots That Actually Work
When you build a subplot, it should fall into a category that supports your core story structure. Here are some proven subplot types that offer emotional weight and structural value:
The Redemption Mirror
A secondary character fails where your protagonist succeeds — or vice versa. It creates contrast and raises the emotional stakes.
The Fragile Relationship
An important relationship (friendship, sibling, mentor) is strained by the events of the main plot. This allows you to explore loyalty, forgiveness, or betrayal from a deeply personal place.
The Ghost Arc
The protagonist’s past resurfaces — through a secret, a memory, or a person — and forces them to confront who they were and how far they’ve come.
The Burdened Caretaker
Your main character has someone they feel responsible for. It might be a child, an ill parent, or a mentee. This subplot adds pressure and moral stakes.
The Betrayal Seed
A close character slowly unravels into a source of tension or betrayal. This works especially well when the main plot is about trust, power, or identity.
The Moral Dilemma
The subplot puts the protagonist in a situation where doing the right thing conflicts with the goal — forcing them to confront their values.
The Impostor Syndrome
The subplot centers around fear of being exposed, failure, or inadequacy — deepening the emotional conflict beneath the surface of the main plot.
The Undercut Victory
Even if the protagonist wins the main plot, the subplot delivers an emotional cost — something lost or broken that keeps the victory grounded.
Each of these structures gives your story emotional variety and helps avoid the dreaded “flat middle” that so many drafts suffer from.
How to Build a Subplot That Belongs
1. Start With Character Pressure
Who puts emotional strain on your main character? What relationships or internal conflicts deserve a spotlight?
Your subplot should start with a personal tension — not just a narrative convenience.
Tip: Don’t invent a subplot to fill time. Find the buried tension that already exists in your character’s world — and bring it to the surface.
2. Give It a Full Arc
Subplots need structure too. That means:
A clear setup (what’s at stake?)
Complications (what gets in the way?)
Resolution (how does it end — and how has it changed the character or plot?)
Not every subplot needs a dramatic twist. But it must evolve — and be resolved in a satisfying way. Don’t leave emotional threads hanging unless that’s the intentional point.
3. Intertwine It With the Main Plot
Here’s where good becomes great.
Look for ways to make the subplot change the main story. Let the resolution of the subplot trigger new events. Or let the main arc force the subplot into crisis.
Examples:
A moral decision in the subplot contradicts the protagonist’s strategy in the main arc
A lie told to protect someone in the subplot explodes into a critical turning point later
A subplot failure becomes the tipping point for the final climax
Nothing should live in isolation. Every piece matters.
Diagnosing Weak Subplots (And Fixing Them)
If your subplot feels flat, slow, or forgettable — try this checklist:
It feels disconnected
→ Find its emotional or thematic link to the main story and strengthen it.
It slows the pacing
→ Tighten scenes. Cut meandering reflection. Raise the stakes.
It has no clear purpose
→ Ask: What does this subplot do? What does it show, test, or break?
It never ends
→ Resolve it with intention. Give it a beat that feels earned and timed for impact.
And finally — if it’s still not working?
Cut it.
There’s no shame in removing a subplot that doesn’t serve your book. Save it for another project. Every element in your novel must work for this story.
Final Thoughts: Subplots Aren’t Side Quests — They’re Support Beams
If your main plot is the spine of your novel, your subplots are the ribs. They give it structure, protection, and movement.
But only if they serve a purpose.
So before you hit “add subplot,” ask yourself:
Does this complicate or deepen the protagonist’s emotional journey?
Does it echo or challenge the central theme?
Will it shift the story in a way that matters?
If yes — great. Build it out with care.
If no — let it go.
Because unforgettable books aren’t built from how many threads they include… but from how tightly those threads are woven.
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